I promised to follow up my last post featuring my lesson on hamburger Beginning-Middle-End stories with some student samples. I'm so excited to show you a couple of my students' awesome work! Here they are:
Student Story 1
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| "I went to the mall last week and there were no American Girl dolls." |
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| "I went to the other side [of the mall]." |
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| "I tried another store to find it. It wasn't there!" |
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| "One of them had yellow hair and one of them had brown hair. How I found my American Girl doll I wanted is I went to a third store." | |
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Student Story 2
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| On Monday Pastor Ralf picked me up. We went to the park with my friends." |
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| "All the water fountains were broken." |
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| "We walked to find more water fountains." |
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| "We found 1 more. It was broken too!" |
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| "Pastor Ralf drove Charlie, Helen, Sally, Kaitlyn, and me to Wendy's so we can get ice cream and water. After Wendy's we went back to church." |
