BME Burger Stories continued…

I promised to follow up my last post featuring my lesson on hamburger Beginning-Middle-End stories with some student samples. I'm so excited to show you a couple of my students' awesome work! Here they are:

Student Story 1

"I went to the mall last week and there were no American Girl dolls."

"I went to the other side [of the mall]."

"I tried another store to find it.  It wasn't there!"

"One of them had yellow hair and one of them had brown hair.  How I found my American Girl doll I wanted is I went to a third store."

 

 

 Student Story 2

On Monday Pastor Ralf picked me up.  We went to the park with my friends."

"All the water fountains were broken."

"We walked to find more water fountains."

"We found 1 more.  It was broken too!"

"Pastor Ralf drove Charlie, Helen, Sally, Kaitlyn, and me to Wendy's so we can get ice cream and water.  After Wendy's we went back to church."